Sunday, August 24, 2008

Great Books? Not so much.

We're Teaching Books That Don't Stack Up (WaPo, 8/24/08):

Far too often, teachers' canonical choices split from teenagers' tastes, intellectual needs and maturity levels. "Why do we assume that every 15-year-old who passes through sophomore English is an English major in the making?" asks a teacher friend. "It's simply not the case. And the kids go elsewhere, just as fast as they can -- anywhere but another book."
FINALLY SOMEONE SAYS IT!

Basically, the gist of this piece is what I've been wondering all along: as a high-school English teacher, what exactly am I teaching? The course descriptions in both the district catalogues and the curriculum framework say something about literature (which differs depending on the grade) but the concepts that are the core of the standards suggest that I'm basically teaching reading and writing. It's been four years--two with an SOL-exam year--and I definitely lean toward thinking that I teach the latter. That probably makes me some really bad, "teach to the test" SOL monkey or something, but when I look at reality, I kinda think I'm right.

Nancy Schnog's commentary here is right on when she goes into some detail about some of the works her high schoolers have encountered, as well as her own children and their struggle with reading list material like "How the Garcia Girls Lost Their Accents," a piece that seems like it was chosen because of its multicultural reach by a department chair or teacher who was trying to hit the "reach everybody" mark with just one book. My favorite part, though, is this:

I watched this play out last year when the junior reading list at my school, consisting mainly of major American authors, was fortified with readings in Shakespeare, Ibsen and the British Romantic poets. When I handed my students two weeks of readings by William Wordsworth and Samuel Taylor Coleridge after a month-long study of American transcendentalists, it became clear that they had overdosed on verse packed with nature description and emotional reflection. "When will we read something with a plot?" asked one agitated boy, obviously yearning for afternoon lacrosse to begin.
Why why WHY are 11th grade students being subjected to Wordsworth and Coleridge? I couldn't stand them when I was in college, for crying out loud. And American transcendentalists aren't nearly as exciting as some English wonk makes them out to be. Yes, Nature and Walden serve as part of the backbone of American literature, but while Emerson's ideas can get across if you make going transcendental seem like something really trippy, all I ever got out of Thoreau was that he bought peas. Whoopdee.

That's not to say that great works aren't important, but it's been to my increasing dismay that the fun that can come in reading--even for those kids who don't have much interest in it--is sucked dry by the required elements of your average high school English class. This piggybacks onto my last post, but what we teach needs as far as content is concerned needs to be reexamined. The concepts are pretty solid: comprehension and analysis are worth looking at, although some of the methodology can be changed.

Some suggestions ...

1. Ditch the textbook. In four years of high school English on Long Island, I never, ever had an English textbook. Shit, I didn't have one in junior high from what I can remember. Why, then, in Virginia am I forcing my students to haul around a book that weighs about as much as my 13-month-old son? And what use are they? Oh, I know, they put pictures with the words on the text and provide vocabulary. Yeah, that's great. They also give snippets of various works, sometimes in a way that is appalling.

For instance, the Prentice Hall Literature book I used in 11th grade last year had an excerpt from The Grapes of Wrath that was simply a short chapter describing the movement of a turtle. Really. That's ALL you're doing with Steinbeck, one of the most important writers in American history? I would rather basically spend nine weeks on The Grapes of Wrath or East of Eden than read half of the stuff we were reading. In fact, I had my students turn their textbooks in around March because I was more or less done using them after we read poetry from the Harlem Renaissance.

I think poetry was pretty much all I used the book for anyway ... and even then, it was limited. When we read "I Hear America Singing," I had students break it down but also read several other pieces that were responsive in nature or whose themes could be considered responsive. This ranged from Langston Hughes's "I Too Sing America" to "Fight the Power" by Public Enemy (I also used "Smells Like Teen Spirit" ... yunno, because I have a desire to look cool or something, I guess). There was another poem, whose name escapes me, that was a Native American poet's response to that poem and if you read the margins in the teacher's edition where all of the teaching suggestions were, there was something about how the author of that particular poem was actually wrong in saying Whitman excluded her people because he actually did mention them in his poetry.

No, really. A textbook criticizing someone's views, totally missing the point and sound like one of those people who bitches about "political correctness."

2. Allow for more freedom of choice. The most appalling part of this piece is when Schnog mentions that The Catcher in the Rye, a teenage standard, is being read by eighth graders. She posts something a student of hers once wrote:

But here's what a former student wrote in an essay about this book that knocked her socks off: "To my twelve-year-old self, the book didn't seem to move anywhere. I didn't understand why Holden couldn't just try a little harder at school. By tenth grade, I had been drunk for the first time. I knew rebellion against my parents, the difficulties of teenage romance, the fakeness of social interaction. As a reader in the eleventh grade, I grew close to Holden; he was a friend who understood me." In adults' determination to create sophisticated teen readers, we sever them from potential fictional soulmates.
Why do I have to go through early American writers and other dry, boring works in the first nine weeks when THEY'RE NOT TESTED ON ANY OF THAT SHIT?! Why can't I start with something that will at least hook them? The greatest success I've had in 11th grade has come with A Raisin in the Sun. Granted, most of the students I had could say two things about it: 1) they didn't understand why Walter turns down the money at the end; and 2) they remember the line about the faggoty shoes. Hey, I never said that connecting with kids meant that they turned into brainiacs right away.

But that was in the spring. I started the year with The Crucible, a play that I love but can be murder on a junior, especially one who doesn't have the ability or just doesn't care to read at his or her own grade level. With an advanced level class, I was able to connect it to a higher concept of fear of "the other" (fear of commies doesn't resonate with students born after 1989); with a general/inclusion class, I was begrudgingly doing the classic, "This is Puritan life" bit and focusing on simply getting through it and making them remember what happened.

3. Stop Testing. I'd love to stop SOL testing but we know that's not going to happen. But why does every piece of literature have to have a terms quiz or vocab quiz or plot test or essay analysis? Can't some of the discovery of stuff like symbols and irony come organically as you read through the text instead of, "Okay, stop. What do the eyes on the billboard represent?"

To this day, I'll never forget sitting in 11th grade Regents English, looking at The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn--praying for my own demise because I hated that class and I LOATHE Mark Twain and always have--and having one of the less-bright bulbs in my reading group figure out on his own that Jim was a Christ figure. We weren't even looking for it. I mean, that's a moment you don't get in a lot of classes because we're so focused on covering certain things with certain works.

But the reality is that we're stuck with what we have because we don't let ourselves get lost in what we're teaching the same way we love to get lost in what we read for pleasure. And that's sad.

8 comments:

Nate said...

I feel your pain. Although I am guilty of a multitude of teacherly sins, I've never used a textbook. Oh, but I have all kinds of other issues to deal with.

Honestly, I think the truth is that it is hard to construct a class that both taps into a varied student body's interests as well as introducing them to writers who have something to say. On the other hand, English class is the last place kids or anybody will have where a bunch of people have read the same thing you have and are possibly willing and able to gab on about it. Imagine, not being in English class and not having that. It seems sad to me, although probably not to most people.

Tom said...

I agree, and know as much as you do from experience that the number of students we teach at one time is definitely part of the problem.

But keeping that in mind, I think that going forward I'm going to try to work in more contemporary works, maybe ones that are at least a little easier to relate to and comprehend and use those as a gateway to the more literary works. Starting with early American or early British literature just because they're first choronologically can turn students off right away and is a little lazy (even if I've done it and will probably do it with my seniors--so I'm guilty too).

Clay Burell said...

I have more luck generating passion about reading by teaching contemporaries too: Sedaris (any and all), DeLillo's _White Noise_ (the kids in that family are brilliant fun and thought-food).

But since your comment box is the size of a Bic lighter today, I can't say any more. The ten characters per line limit is giving me vertigo.

Enjoyed it though. Thanks for the laughs and the schadenfreude.

Hey, really? You hate Twain? I love that guy.

Clay Burell said...

bigger box now, whoopee. so i'll add: McCarthy's The Road and No Country for Old Men were hits for my seniors the summer before class started.

I shit you not, though: Gilgamesh, the 2004 Mitchell translation, turned on my freshmen a couple years ago. So did Gulliver, read as the mystery he intends it to be read as (that mystery namely being, "How did Gulliver's travels turn him into the madman of the Foreward?")

Graphic novels? V for Vendetta?

But I ramble. English teacher.

What novels _would_ you think work?

(And Nate, what percentage of students in high school English classes do you think honestly read what we assign, on average? I guess it varies by school/class/teacher, but really, I think the "we're all reading and getting into the same book" thing only really starts to happen, as the inciting article for Tom's post suggests, when declared English majors take English classes in college - non-required ones.)

doyle said...

For instance, the Prentice Hall Literature book I used in 11th grade last year had an excerpt from The Grapes of Wrath that was simply a short chapter describing the movement of a turtle.

I love that passage, and may use it in science class--it's so much more interesting (to me, anyway) when you can read it just to read it. "Schooliness" (Clay Burrell's word, and a great one) kills the passage.

Forcing a child to analyze it (or go through the trouble of leeching others' ideas through a websearch) demolishes not just love of literature, it can put a dent in a child's love of biology as well.

But the reality is that we're stuck with what we have because we don't let ourselves get lost in what we're teaching the same way we love to get lost in what we read for pleasure. And that's sad.

Truly sad, and one of the major problems with public education. We don't let our students get lost, either.

My children went to public school, by our choice. (We are fortunate enough to have both bright kids and the means to send them elsewhere.)

At one point I considered homeschooling, at least for part of the day, particularly for science and math.

No, I am not a rabid creationist, nor did I fear Big Ideas--but a few of the teachers along the way taught science the way you are squeezed to teach literature.

I didn't understand why then, but I am beginning to understand now that I am entering my third year teaching.

Most of my kids will not become professional scientists, and that's fine--maybe we should have a professional track for the few that will--but at the very least, science in school should foster skepticism and critical thinking.

(One of my goals, and it looks shameful stated publicly, is to make sure I don't turn off the kids who still have a remnant of curiosity when they hit high school. This is easier said than done.)

Eric Hoefler said...

Forcing a child to analyze it (or go through the trouble of leeching others' ideas through a websearch) demolishes not just love of literature, it can put a dent in a child's love of biology as well.

I struggle with this. I get this sentiment, and half the time agree with it, but the other half I think it's the WAY we go about analyzing works that's the problem, not analysis itself. First, analysis tends to be re-hashed and disconnected from the students' actual lives (as Doyle is suggesting). Second, we expect analysis before we allow passion to develop.

Take a true baseball fan, for instance. They analyze the hell out of the game: players, ratings, trades, etc., etc. Genuine analysis is the mark of passion, I think. Ask someone what they're passionate about, and if they can't offer a ton of analysis on the topic, they're just pretending.

The trick, I think, is building up the passion first, then using that interest and energy to lead to the analysis (rather than the bass-ackward approach of expecting students to develop passion, or even interest, by starting with analysis).

Clay Burell said...

For the record, I love the turtle passage too. I love so much of the rest of the novel too, though - my wife and I read it aloud to each other a few years ago in its entirety, bedtime story-like - that I can't imagine the textbook-makers' decision to rip that little bit out of the entire work. What a horrible job that must be.

I've never used an English lit textbook, even when assigned one. If our job is to inculcate a love of reading and an ability to notice how good writing works, choose your novels or poems (and that imperative does not necessarily exclude students choosing) and trust that the discoveries will happen through the reading.

Tom, somehow you've got me thinking about how the focus on professor-ese terminology in literature classes (and the good bastards at the ETS / College Board do force this) does so many horrible things to our teaching and our students. It makes us boring, and it makes our students think that being a literary type means being a puffed up little prig who thinks it's impressive to use words like "onomatopoeia" in talks and writings about books.

In my book, nothing is further from the truth - until you decide in college you want to become one of those professors who talks and writes that way (for a slim readership of other dons) for a living.

I'd rather use, say, the book review pages from some newspaper - The Times, The Guardian, Salon.com, the NYTimes or WaPo - as models of how non-dons write well about good reads. You find "onomatopoeia" in those pages almost never. But you find much better writing, generally, for much bigger readerships. Literary people don't read professors as a rule, unless they publish the occasional journalistic piece for the popular press.

D.B. said...

I agree with some of the more salient points of what you are saying. Textbooks are, for the most part, ungainly and unnecessary, not to mention reductionist in their view of what makes a good excerpt.

What is interesting to me is something I came across in a catalog from some teaching resource outlet. Holt, Rineheart, Winston have a series of quality paper-back sized hardcover books that take the textbook in pieces. There is one for short stories, one for poetry, and so on and so forth. The impressive bit is some of the selection within these "readers." Where else in a textbook are you going to find Twain alongside Sherman Alexie and Gabriel Garcia Marquez. They even have Borges in there. The book is smaller and can be handed out for less time (say the Unit on Short Stories). Everything else, Shakespeare and the rest, can be had in trade paperbacks.

But that is not the key point. The key is the reference made to "Catcher." Sometimes, introducing students to great literature is the best thing we can do. There are not many people I can think of who do not enjoy or at least respect the integrity of this novel. It is a fantastic and affective piece of writing and it should be accessible to all. The problem with singling out "Great Books" as some kind of dirty word is that books like "Catcher" may well get sucked into the void with the rest of the jettisoned masterworks.

If there is a disconnect between students and the novels and other writings that lie at the heart of their national discourse, then perhaps we the teachers need to reexamine how that happened. At the late stage of high school, there is not much teachers can do to reclaim the greatness of books like "The Grapes of Wrath" and "To Kill A Mockingbird." The worst part is that the only reason that any reclamation needs to be done is because lower level teachers have so little respect for the content of these great works that they only teach "skills."

If we look at the trend since the "skills" movement started, you will see the leveling of test scores and cognitive growth throughout the country. If you then consider that the "skills" movement expects teachers in the 4th and 12th grade to teach the same skill set, a lot of the mystery of the ennui and stagnation of student achievement becomes less mysterious.

So what can increase student achievement? Interfacing with these great books. The student who can refer to Holden Caulfield as a literary soulmate is much more into learning than the student who cn name the number of times Salinger uses alliteration in a text. Sometimes, however, I have seen teachers do just that in the name of teaching a "skill" from literature.

As a final note, I was speaking with a colleague about "The Grapes of Wrath" and she believed that the exclusion of that book was perfectly fine in any English curriculum. When asked why, she simply said that it was preposterous for any white author to try and equate the plight of the Okies to slavery in the 1860s. At that point in the conversation I had to throw my arms up, leave the room, and sigh knowingly that she must have been brought up in a purely "skills"-oriented school; otherwise, I think she would have been slightly more attuned to the relevance of the novel, not some imagined slight by Steinbeck.